On my own writing front — I figured out what’s been bugging me about the second quarter of the book. There are two sex scenes, and they’re so…dry.
What I mean is that the characters are doing this and that, but very little emotions are coming through. My characters have a lot of history together, so the scenes rang false when I reread them for the sheer lack of feelings from both of them. A lot of missed opportunities.
I also decided to add a couple of short scenes to advance the main subplot (the court intrigue part). They’re all new and feature secondary characters. I think they’ll add a bit more to the subplot because currently the book’s about 85% romance.
After dinner I spent about ten minutes jotting down notes on my next project — a futuristic paranormal romance. I can’t decide if I want to write it in 1st person or not. The heroine is snarky and slightly eccentric, but I think the snarky 1st person narrator is a bit of a cliché now. I wonder if her voice can come through just as clearly in 3rd person.