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Where Did August Go?

Can you believe it's already September? 2010 is two-thirds over!

I've been busy with the All's Fair revision -- the final round before I send it to my first beta reader.

The progress bar above shows that I've gone through ten chapters out of twenty-one (48% complete).

September's going to be pretty busy. I plan to wrap up All's Fair and get some beta feedback. Then I'm taking some time off to finish the final A Goddess to Love revision (already have the beta feedback) and read Neuromancer and Snow Crash. (No, I've never read either of them. I know, I know...)

Afterward, I plan to consider certain elements in All's Fair and its sequel plus a sekrit novella project. They're all stand-alone projects -- you don't even have to read them in order, but there is some definite overlap in world building (same time period, though in different parts of the world) and recurring characters.

P.S. I just finished Kresley Cole's Demon from the Dark. If you haven't read this book, OMG, do it now!

Snippet: Contemporary Romance h/H First Meeting

snippetI've not written contemporary romance in ages, but when I was starting out, I wrote three of them before I decided to write something more otherworldly.

This is a short snippet -- the first meeting between h/H. Natalie Hall (heroine) just learned that her boss got fired, and she's apprehensive as she gets called to see Alex Damon. (She expects to be fired based on what her assistant told her).

Note: This is an uncorrected excerpt.


Someone with cropped black hair sat in an executive leather chair, facing the windows. Torrents of rain blurred the view of gray roads and red brake lights. A large tanned hand held a cell phone to an ear, but the voice was too low for her to eavesdrop. Natalie took a long breath and counted to ten, welcoming the respite before she had to face Alex Damon, the chairman and CEO of DDE's holding company, Global Strategies Corporation. She'd never seen him in real life, although there were plenty of pictures in glossy gossip magazines. Being one of the planet's most eligible bachelors and a self-made billionaire tended to make one's face well-known.

Finally he snapped the phone shut and swiveled around to face her.

"Yes?" His voice was a steely baritone that demanded an immediate answer with just that one syllable.

His entire body emanated authority and raw sexuality. The dark tailored suit he was wearing tried to throw a veneer of civilization over him, but failed. He would've been frightening if it weren't for the iron control in the winter gray eyes that said he ruled, not his primal instinct. She shivered as his gaze brushed over her, head to toe and then back up to her face. She had the most absurd feeling that he was undressing her with his eyes.

Nonsense. He was probably trying to decide if she would cry at bad news and whether he should delegate the distasteful task to someone else.

"I'm Natalie Hall. My assistant said you wanted to see me." She noted with relief that her voice didn't betray her nervousness.

He frowned slightly, his gaze darting to her barren ring finger then back to her face. Most people didn't expect Asian when they heard the name "Hall". For some reason it pleased her that she'd managed to surprise him.

He rose from his seat to his full height, which was impressive. He walked around the desk and extended a hand. "Alex Damon. Nice to meet you." This time the baritone was more modulated. It slithered over her like strands of supple leather.

"Nice to meet you too." Natalie shook his hand. It was slightly calloused and infused her cool skin with warmth.

He shut the door and gestured at a chair. "Please have a seat."

"Thank you."

She sat, putting her laptop bag and purse discreetly beside the chair and crossing her legs. She had the odd feeling that Alex was staring at them, but when she glanced up, he was busy pulling another chair from the other side of the office. God she was ridiculous. Of course he wasn't looking at her legs. They were her best asset, but he'd dated models with legs up to their armpits.

When he sat across from her, barely enough personal space remained to be polite. She could feel a delicious heat coming off his body, smell a whiff of spicy cologne. Something stirred in her, sexual and dangerous. She stomped on it. This wasn't the time, this wasn't the place, and he definitely wasn't the right man to be attracted to. Business and pleasure never mixed well.

"Your assistant told me you had a doctor's appointment," Alex said, breaking her train of thought. "I hope you aren't coming down with something. You look a little flushed."

She suppressed a surge of mortification. She was usually better at maintaining a professional façade.

"I'm fine," she said, flashing him a quick smile. Danielle must have tried to cover for her, but Natalie could see that lying to this man would be a mistake. "There's been some miscommunication, and I apologize. I was in a fender-bender this morning." She quickly added, "Nothing major, but you know how it is on the Beltway."

He nodded, and she relaxed a little until he stretched his legs out. The fabric of his pants spread tautly over lean muscles, and his calves almost touched hers. The heat coming off him was like a furnace. She wanted to sink into it.

"Well, down to business. As I'm sure you've heard, there have been some changes here since I arrived this morning."

It was her turn to nod. What was he trying to say?

"Ralph is no longer in charge of the operation. His replacement will come from Caissa Enterprises, one of Global Strategies' European subsidiaries."

An executive from Europe. She didn't know what to make of that. There were undoubtedly people at DDE who were qualified to take over. But then this wasn't her company, and her opinion probably mattered very little to Alex.

"Since Vivien left with him, I have no choice but to rely on you. I believe you were her second-in-command?"

"Yes."

"Good." Alex smiled. "Ralph's replacement is expected later this week. Once he's here, I hope you can help him with the transition."

"I understand." She suppressed a sigh of relief. So she wasn't going to be let go.

"You also need to brief me on some of the major projects. I plan to be more actively involved for a while, until I'm satisfied with the operational efficiency here."

She blinked. Yesterday's edition of the Wall Street Journal had reported that he was returning to Shanghai to oversee several sweeping projects in the burgeoning Chinese market that could be very lucrative for Global Strategies. Although DDE was a profitable subsidiary, it was still only one of many mid-sized ones, not something that should consume much of his attention.

He shifted slightly in his seat, looking at her intently, and his legs brushed hers. She held her breath.

"Do you have any plans tonight?" he said.

She shook her head automatically.

Since her latest breakup six months ago, she'd devoted all her attention to work. Work didn't disillusion her like Marcus had. She still couldn't believe he'd proposed to another woman less than a month after they'd split up.

"Excellent." A charming smile appeared on Alex's lips. "Would you like to have dinner with me?"

She shot him a sharp look. She didn't indulge in interoffice dating, no matter how delicious the man in the question was. It was the stupidest CLM -- career limiting move -- she could think of.

"I'd like to talk more about DDE, but I don't have time at the moment. We can discuss it over dinner. I hate to make you extend your work day, but unfortunately that's the only time I'm available."

Despite his smooth tone, she couldn't shake off the feeling that he was amused by her silent response. Was he laughing at her for thinking that he might have romantic interests in her?

She straightened. "It won't be a problem." I hope you won't be a problem.

"Eleanor -- my assistant -- will send you an email this afternoon. How's seven for you?"

"Fine." She rose and shook his hand briskly, purposefully maintaining eye contact even as she felt her hand almost completely engulfed by his much larger and stronger one. Then she gathered her things and left.

A Fresh New Week!

Last week was just not my week. In chronological order:

  • Some sandals that used to be comfortable suddenly gave me four really bad blisters on Monday after ten minutes of walking.
  • I had the most horrific neck pain plus a nasty migraine for four consecutive days.
  • I had a severe allergic reaction to food that had never given me trouble previously.
  • Almost got hit by a truck -- twice -- on my way to the grocery store (10 minute bike ride each way).
  • Fell and cut my wrist -- if the cut had been deeper I might've bled to death.
  • Kuro passed away.
  • My computer died for no reason that I can think of, and I couldn't work my mojo to fix it. So I had to do a clean reinstall. Thankfully I was able to save all my data.
  • My left forearm became swollen and inflamed for no apparent reason.
  • Emails I sent didn't reach any of the recipients.
  • My post-clean-reinstall computer died again yesterday. I couldn't save it, so I had to do another clean reinstall (no data lost at least).

OTOH -- I finished reading two books and was able to wrap up Step 2 in my revision process. So now I'm ready to make the changes to the soft copy.

Anyway, this is a brand new week. So hopefully whatever evil Murphy's Law cloud is gone.

How was your week? (Hope it was better than mine!)

Music for the WIP Climactic Final Fight Scene

Most people think I listen to some really upbeat and/or tense tracks from action movies or something, but actually I listen to something like this when I'm working on the final fight scenes. The current WIP, which is going through some heavy revision, has a knife, a garrot, a gun, lots of blood, tears and a body.

BTW -- I adore the lyrics, though I will not translate them because I think it takes away from the meaning of the song for me. You can take a look at YouTube video subtitles, but the translation there isn't the best, either.

But the title means (in case anybody is wondering... and some Korean people don't seem to know exactly what it means either) "the wind at the end of heaven". (You can also call it "the wind that reaches the end of heaven" but I think it's not as poetic.)

How I Revise

revision angstI'm in the middle of revision right now. Though my process is different for each project, I'll share the revision method for my current WIP.

Step One: I print out the whole thing in whatever font strikes my fancy, but it's always double-spaced so I have enough room to scribble notes. Then I read it through in 3-5 days and make notes. They're not extensive, mind you. It's mostly for big things like:

  • Yawn. This lags.
  • This doesn't belong here.
  • I have no idea what this sentence is trying to say.
  • Oops. Misplaced punctuation / words.
  • Who's saying this?
  • Action choreography doesn't make sense here.
  • This point deserves emotional depth upgrade.
  • Whoa. Emo much?
  • Repetitious.

Step Two: I consult my Maass notes and go through the hard copy draft again, this time marking places that could be changed / improved per my notes. If I run out of space on the actual manuscript page, I use a notebook designated for revision.

Step Three: I finally make all the changes on my computer.

Step Four: I spend about 2 weeks doing nothing but reading other people's books and/or working on some other projects, but I do not revise anything I've written, even if it's not my WIP. (I might beta for other people who I may ping later for Steps Seven and Eight below.) This helps me "reset" my eyes and brain, so to speak.

Step Five: I print out the WIP again. Repeat Step One. Then go through it again with ECE and EDITS.

Step Six: Make changes to my soft copy. Send to the 1st set of betas.

Step Seven: Make any changes as needed per the 1st set of betas.

Step Eight: Send it to the 2nd set of betas. (By this point, the manuscript should be more or less in shape.) Make final changes as needed.

Step Nine: Send to Agent. Give myself a week of detox time from revision so I can "reset" again as I know Agent usually has her own set of revision comments, etc.

How do you revise? What tools / books have you found helpful?



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